The rest of the paragraphs is fine but the last paragraphs, the transition from Borneo Agenda to People’s Agenda is not well argued.
To some extent, it is insulting to make the insinuation that because Sabah and Sarawak are impoverish, they might as well go for the People’s Agenda of Pakatan.
The same tag line must have been used during the formation of Malaysia.
Just like people cannot live on bread alone, Sabah and Sarawak need their guiding principles to move forward, and this means to reconstitute the original basis for the formation of Malaysia.
That is not to say the proponent of the Borneo Agenda cannot cooperate with Pakatan.
It is to say, Sabah and Sarawak Pakatan and non-Pakatan (opposition friendly) leaders will betray the political interest of Sabah and Sarawak if they abandon the agenda to please the powerful Pakatan leadership.